need sugestions regarding letter

[agent47er]

hi everyone
i just typed out this letter out of my head I need to send it to the secretary of the state rifles association.
Please give me suggestions if any
Thanks A Lot for Reading this post


H.No. 1121 Sector – 13
Urban Estate
Karnal Haryana 132001


July 16, 2006


Secretary
Haryana State Rifle Association
House No. 480 Sector-9
Faridabad Haryana 121002


Sir/Mam

I am Hemant Wadhwa, an 18 year old resident of Karnal, Haryana and am interested in joining the state Rifles Assosiation. Kindly send details regarding the documents that are required for the same along with other details such as the fees, mentanence charges(if applicable), list of Shooting Ranges accessible to members of the Assosiation etc.

Sincerely

Hemant Wadhwa

[TenX]

Seems fine

Just added a little more below:

Secretary
Haryana State Rifle Association
House No. 480 Sector-9
Faridabad Haryana 121002


Dear Sir/Mam
SUB: ENROLMENT INTO THE STATE RIFLE ASSOCIATION

I would like to introduce myself as Hemant Wadhwa, an 18 year old resident of Karnal, Haryana. I am keenly interested in joining the state Rifle Assosiation to further my interest in shooting sports. Kindly send me details regarding the documents that are required for the same, along with other details such as the fees, maintenance charges (if applicable), list of Shooting Ranges accessible to members of the Assosiation etc.

Looking forward to becoming a member at the earliest,
Sincerely

Hemant Wadhwa

[agent47er]

thanks a lot for your help tenx.... really appreciate it